midterm feedback

Professor's opinion： Question 1: Accurately define parasitism and symbiosis (logically) and avoid using negative judgments (you can try to list the first image and summarize their common characteristics) Question 2: How do parasitism and symbiosis affect the site? Specifically list the effects on terrain and plant types. Question 3: (pre) Clarify the connection between the theme and the production project. It is meaningless to simply list the projects and experiences that have been produced. You can try to state the overall theme first. Question 4: Farmland areas have different forms (pergolas, etc.). Try to present them in a variety of ways instead of simply generalizing.
personal feedback During this midterm review, the guest's suggestion was that we should not only draw charts according to the requirements, but also apply all the surveys and drawn content to the topic we are investigating. At the same time, we should clarify the definition of the topic before the speech (such as the parasitic and symbiotic relationships investigated in this content are actually the interaction between the subject and object), so that the audience can quickly understand the content of the speech

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